2016年英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫(xiě)作高分范文精選
四六級(jí)總分為710分，作文分值比例為：15%，即作文106.5分。所以，作文還是很重要的。下面是yjbys網(wǎng)小編提供給大家關(guān)于英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫(xiě)作高分范文精選，希望對(duì)同學(xué)們的有所幫助。
范文一：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then discuss the heavier and heavier burden on pupils. You should give sound arguments to support your views and write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
The Burdens on the Shoulders of Pupils
What is delineated in the picture is that more and more pupils are becoming overweight not because of their own weights but because of their heavier backpacks. We may wonder why pupils' backpacks become heavier and heavier under the quality-oriented education. As far as I'm concerned, there are several reasons to explain it.
First of all, they have to take a lot of courses at school. Many pupils have to take many exams by the end of the term. The pressure on learning makes them carry many books to school everyday. Secondly, in addition to taking many courses at school, they need to gain knowledge and skills in some cram schools. Many parents feel worried that their kids would lag behind others if they do not go to tutoring centers. Thirdly, in their spare time they also have to take part in such contests as math contests and English contests in order to get themselves more opportunities to enter key schools.
Undoubtedly, pupils should have a happy time in their childhood. I hope they can be carefree without so
many learnin~ burdens on their slim shoulders.
范文二：
近年來(lái)，手機(jī)的流行催生了一大批“低頭族”，無(wú)論是在擁擠的車(chē)廂還是在與朋友聚會(huì)的時(shí)間，甚至在馬路上，在階梯上都會(huì)有人低頭看手機(jī)，對(duì)此現(xiàn)象，你的看法是什么呢?
題目要求：
The Impact of the Cellphone on Interpersonal Communication
1、現(xiàn)在，各個(gè)場(chǎng)所“低頭族”現(xiàn)象比較普遍
2、出現(xiàn)這一現(xiàn)象的原因
3、我對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象的看法和建議
參考范文：
The Impact of the Cellphone on Interpersonal Communication
The picture depicts a couple dating in the park. While the man just focuses on his cellphones, and doesn’t pay any attention to his partner or the nature beauty in the park. This picture reflects a common phenomenon in today’s society: people spend too much time with their cellphones and communicate less and less with the people around them.
Nowadays, the smart-cellphones become more and more important in our daily life. They have made our life more convenient. We are timely aware of the most latest news around or faraway from us.
However, everything has two sides. Except for all the advantages, the smart-cellphones also have brought some problems. First, when you’re focus on the cellphone, you may ignore the beautiful scene around you. What’s worse, you are just absorbed in your own small world, rather than share your happiness and sorrows with the family. You hardly talk with your family and the ones around you. You become indifferent to them.
All in all, let’s put down the cellphones and spend more time communicating with our family and friends face to face directly.
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