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英語六級(jí)范文《學(xué)生還貸問題》
現(xiàn)今,在高校有許多大學(xué)生通過助學(xué)貸款完成自己的學(xué)業(yè),但是有些學(xué)生畢業(yè)后沒有能力或拒絕按時(shí)還貸。對于學(xué)生還貸一事,你怎么看?我們來看看六級(jí)考生怎么說。
On Paying back Student Loans
Nowadays, college students who need financial aid can apply for student loans provided by state-owned commercial banks, which can help them pay their tuition fees and cover their necessary daily expense. Take Beijing Normal University as an example, the last year has witnessed that 245 college students applied for student loans.
However,to our disappointment, there is an increasing rate of students who have failed to refund the loans in time. Some students are really unable to repay the money after graduation because of unemploy-ment or some other reasons. But there are a number of students refu-sing to pay it back even though they can.
As for me,college students should increase their awareness of credit. Anyone in debt should try his best to repay the loans in due time. If they are really in great difficulty,it is proper to inform the bank as soon as pos-sible and apply for a delayed repayment. Only in this way can both college students and banks benefit from the policy.
寫作點(diǎn)評(píng):
毫無疑問,第一段的大寫字母和數(shù)據(jù)能迅速吸引閱卷老師的 眼球。同時(shí)使用了 witness, take…as an example等好詞和詞組,無 疑增加了亮點(diǎn)。
第一段:直接提出該段中心“現(xiàn)今,在髙校有許多大學(xué)生通過 助學(xué)貸款完成自己的學(xué)業(yè)' 而后,“一句話”舉出例 子,更加形象地說明大學(xué)生申請助學(xué)貸款。
第二段:直接展現(xiàn)該段主題句“但是有些學(xué)生畢業(yè)后沒有能力 或拒絕按時(shí)還貸”。緊接著進(jìn)行細(xì)節(jié)化的說明,用 unable to repay the money after graduation because of unemployment 和 refusing to pay it back even though they can來說明。
第三段:直接展現(xiàn)該段中心“我認(rèn)為貸款的學(xué)生應(yīng)如何對待還 貸問題”。認(rèn)為,應(yīng)該盡力償還貸款,如果實(shí)在有困 難,可以申請延期還貸。最后以倒裝句Only in this way can both college students and banks benefit from the policy.結(jié)尾。
點(diǎn)亮文章的詞語與句子:
1. financial aid 財(cái)政幫助
2.apply for 申請
3.refund the loans 償還貸款
4.awareness of credit 誠信的意識(shí)
5.Only in this way can both college students and banks benefit from the policy.(倒裝句,常用的一種亮點(diǎn)句型。)
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