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2016年GMAT英語(yǔ)作文機(jī)經(jīng)
1.小島舉辦足球賽
>>> 本月原始
V1.講的是一個(gè)B country, five yrs ago, host 了一個(gè)soccer體育盛事，結(jié)果tourists數(shù)量激增25%，帶來了經(jīng)濟(jì)增長(zhǎng)�，F(xiàn)在B國(guó)又想要發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)吸引游客，就想著再開一個(gè)international competition，覺得游客還會(huì)再來，再獲得成功。
>>> 考古
V3 是說一個(gè)小島五年前舉行過一場(chǎng)足球賽,在接下來的幾年里面旅游人數(shù)增加了 25%, 所 以 arguer 認(rèn)為要再舉行一場(chǎng)盛大的 sporting event,這一定能促進(jìn)旅游發(fā)展而且對(duì)小島的 經(jīng)濟(jì)有好處!!!
1. 足球賽和旅游人數(shù)增加之間不一定有因果; 2. 旅游人數(shù)增加是因?yàn)閯e的原因; 3. 幾年 前的和現(xiàn)在的情況不一樣; 4.舉辦 event 的 cost 未知,不一定 benefit 經(jīng)濟(jì)。
V5 B 城市 host events 的 argument 是一個(gè) office 的官員寫給貌似旅游部門的 memo,主 要內(nèi)容是因?yàn)?B 城市(覺得好像翻譯應(yīng)該是巴西吧)在 5 年前 hosted a major soccer competition. 然后在隨后的三年里 the number of tourists increased 25%。所以他們向 該部門建議,host another sport event 來吸引游客,然后就能夠通過吸引更多的游客來 提高該市的經(jīng)濟(jì)了。
>>> 參考思路
1. 時(shí)地全等:五年前舉行過一次足球賽繼而接下來的幾年里面旅游人數(shù)增加 25%,但是這 并不代表現(xiàn)在還能吸引游客。舉例可以說全球經(jīng)濟(jì)不好,旅游的人數(shù)可能會(huì)減少,或者當(dāng)?shù)?治安不佳,旅客反而減少了。
2. 錯(cuò)誤因果:辦足球賽和旅游人數(shù)上升這兩個(gè)事件沒有必然的因果關(guān)系,有可能旅游人數(shù) 上升是因?yàn)槠渌蛩?例如這個(gè)小島開發(fā)了新的旅游項(xiàng)目從而吸引了更多顧客。
3. 無關(guān)假設(shè):舉辦盛大的 sporting event 并不一定能帶來客觀的經(jīng)濟(jì)效益,盡管有這個(gè)可 能性,但是如果舉辦活動(dòng)的 cost 很高,賺得的錢無法 cover 很高的 cost 也同樣不可行。
2. Citrus fruit
V1.作文是 citrus fruit那個(gè)，價(jià)格在11年里5 cents漲到30 cents，但是只有一年是天氣不好，所以種植者需要為如此excessive的漲價(jià)負(fù)責(zé)。。好像之前有看到過，反正不難啦
>>> 參考思路
1. 因果關(guān)系：種植者抬價(jià)并不是唯一影響因素，可能還有環(huán)境保護(hù)、加工價(jià)格上升、人力成本上升，或者通貨膨脹等因素。Monetary inflation, increased distribution and labor costs, or alterations in supply and demand conditions the growers’ desire for increased profits.
2. 無根據(jù)假設(shè)：天氣好，所以果樹的產(chǎn)量一定高。The editorial rests on a unconvincing assumption that the bad weather in only one of these last eleven years leads to the yield’s reduction in citrus fruit.
3. 錯(cuò)誤類比：檸檬和橘類水果類比是否正確;或者說，檸檬有其特殊性，譬如檸檬都是進(jìn)口的，比較貴，因此不具有可比性。
>>> 參考范文
In this editorial the author argues for the imposition of strict pricing regulations in order to prevent citrus growers from continued inflation of prices of citrus fruit. The need for such regulation is supported by the author’s contention that citrus growers have been unnecessarily raising prices of citrus fruit in the past. The evidence for this allegation is the fact that the price of lemons at Megamart has increased from 15 cents per pound to over a dollar a pound during the preceding 11-year period. The author maintains that this increase is unjustifiable because weather conditions have been favorable to citrus production in all but one of those years. This argument is flawed for several reasons.
First and foremost, the author assumes that the only factor that influences the price of citrus fruit is the weather. Other factors such as monetary inflation, increased distribution and labor costs, or alterations in supply an demand conditions are completely ignored as possible sources for the increase. The charge that citrus growers have unnecessarily raised prices can be sustained only if these and other possible factors can be completely ruled out as contributing to the price increases. Since the author fails to address these factors, the recommendation calling for strict pricing regulations can be dismissed out of hand as frivolous.
Second, the author assumes that the only way to combat increased prices is through government intervention. In a free enterprise system many other means of affecting the pricing of goods are available. For example, boycotting a product and thereby influencing supply and demand conditions of the commodity is an effective means of influencing the price of the product. In a free market economy the call for price regulation by the government should occur only when all other means to rectify the problem have been exhausted.
In conclusion, the author’s argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument it would be necessary to show that the only factor influencing the price increases is the growers’ desire for increased profits.
3.奢侈化妝品公司
>>> 本月原始
V1.說一個(gè)叫Kalloni的做cosmetic product的公司CEO講，公司在Europe的業(yè)績(jī)很好，但是在the US就不好。于是他就提出說要partner with Mega-Beauty，因?yàn)镸ega有unparalled distribution network，這樣之后能提高他們的long-term profitability。 提好critique的吧，我寫的一個(gè)是沒有證據(jù)表明在US業(yè)績(jī)不好和distribution有關(guān)，再一個(gè)就是沒有說明Mega怎么能幫助他們了。
>>> 考古
V1
一個(gè)歐洲的奢侈化妝品Kalloni公司的CEO說，丫們的Luxury的產(chǎn)品雖然不錯(cuò)一直打不進(jìn)美國(guó)市場(chǎng)。慎重考慮之后丫推薦和美國(guó)的一個(gè)叫做Mega Beauty的大型經(jīng)銷商合作。Mega Beauty是一個(gè)擁有20多種discount低價(jià)/廉價(jià)化妝品牌的大型經(jīng)銷商。CEO說合作之后相信能打開市場(chǎng)增加銷量，并且對(duì)公司Long-term的Growth和profitability有幫助 。 我已經(jīng)把我覺得可以攻擊的點(diǎn)標(biāo)出來了= =
V2
Kallni還是Kallon公司的那個(gè)，這個(gè)公司的C神馬luxury product(覺得這里是一個(gè)分析點(diǎn)結(jié)合后面的美國(guó)分銷商)是have had been well known in Europe, but in the U.S. we have had difficulty selling 還是 getting market, 然后ceo建議，經(jīng)過 careful consideration， 美國(guó)的distributor 是個(gè)不錯(cuò)的合作對(duì)象，哦名字是Mega-Beauty 神馬(記得住是因?yàn)檫@邊的彩票也叫Mega)，M公司怎么20 national discount brand，而且has over 1500 discount store，與M 的agreement能夠讓K公司get access to the distribution network that 什么 整個(gè)industry, 然后這個(gè)agreement可以給K公司long term growth 和 profitability。
V3
AWA一個(gè)歐洲的small，luxury corporate的ceo寫了一個(gè)memo說和mega-beauty，一個(gè)美國(guó)distributor聯(lián)合可以解決一直停滯不前的美國(guó)市場(chǎng)。并且可以earn profit和long-term interest。這個(gè)distributor和20個(gè)discount brand做，在美國(guó)有1500家門店。
>>> 參考思路
1.無理由假設(shè)：奢飾化妝品和低端化妝品的受眾不同，銷售方法也不同，不能認(rèn)為兩者的合作可以促進(jìn)高端化妝品的銷售。有可能高端化妝品與低端產(chǎn)品合作之后，影響高端產(chǎn)品在消費(fèi)者心目中的形象，從而影響銷售量。
2.時(shí)地全等:從現(xiàn)在的發(fā)展情況無法推出未來的發(fā)展趨勢(shì)，所以說兩者的合作會(huì)對(duì)公司長(zhǎng)期發(fā)展有幫助的說法是錯(cuò)誤的。
3.因果關(guān)系——忽略它因：影響利潤(rùn)的因素很多，還包括生產(chǎn)成本，與meg beauty合作的成本等，不能簡(jiǎn)單認(rèn)為兩者合作就一定對(duì)未來的利潤(rùn)有幫助。
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