提升雅思寫作水平技巧
為了幫助考生們更好地備考雅思聽力考試,雅思欄目為您帶來提升雅思寫作水平技巧(語法篇),預(yù)祝同學(xué)們早日和雅思說拜拜!
首先,關(guān)于語法自測,我寫了這么幾個句子,請各位看官自己找找錯誤(數(shù)據(jù)隨意編的,請勿當(dāng)真~):
1. The environment has been damaged severely, we need to protect our environment.
2. The air in rural areas is much better than urban areas.
3. There are two people sit there and talk with each other happily.
4. It is benefit to people if they could persist on exercise.
5. Knowing that students may be tempted from TV programs, it is important that students should be supervised by parents at home.
6. Government needs to protect our environment.
7. Teacher salaries rose from 70% in 1981 to 80% in 2001.
8, The number of married Americans reduced from 100000 in 1922 to 50000 in 1930.
9. The price of iPhone reached a peak which is 3400 rmb in 1990.
1. The environment has been damaged severely, we need to protect our environment.
缺少and/so連接詞
2. The air in rural areas is much better than urban areas.
比較對象錯誤
應(yīng)該是....better than that in urban areas.
3. There are two people sit there and talk with each other happily.
動詞數(shù)量問題(更深層次是非謂語錯誤)
sit和talk都加ing
4. It is benefit to people if they could persist on exercise.
最簡單粗暴但是很多同學(xué)犯的錯誤
benefit改成beneficial
5. Knowing that students may be tempted from TV programs, it is important that students should be supervised by parents at home.
邏輯主語的問題,逗號的后面應(yīng)該改成
......., parents need to supervise students at home.
6. Government needs to protect our environment.
government是可數(shù)名詞哦
7. Teacher salaries rose from 40% in 1981 to 50% in 1991.
40%和50%后面各加一個of the total school spending(來源自劍8T2T1)
8, The number of married Americans reduced from 100000 in 1922 to 50000 in 1930.
reduce表示的并不是具體數(shù)字的下降,改成簡單的decline/decrease/drop即可
9. The price of iPhone reached a peak which is 3400 rmb in 1990.
不要使用定從去描述句子,你可以用with連接
腦袋里面暫時就想到了這九個小句子,如果你覺得可以輕松找到8個句子全部的語法錯誤所在,那么理論上來說,你應(yīng)該是具備了6.5及6.5分以上分?jǐn)?shù)的語法水平,請注意我的措詞,僅僅是語法水平,但這個語法水平是必不可少的。如果有4~5個句子你可以比較輕松的找到問題,那么6分的語法水平應(yīng)該是差不多的,這些問題是找我批改的作文里面最容易出現(xiàn)的`一些簡單問題(除了句子5稍微有一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)難),避免這些可以幫助寫作6.5分以下的同學(xué)提高0.5分左右,當(dāng)然,還有單詞的拼寫、可數(shù)or不可數(shù)(這個其實(shí)對我來說也是煩死人以及主謂一致等小問題,都要盡可能的避免。
原來有個學(xué)生聽了我的課,跑去跟助教說Panda老師說了,語法錯誤是沒關(guān)系的,錯了也不減分!我聽到助教的反饋之后表示很無奈,因?yàn)槲业脑捠侨绻阍谝黄笞魑膐r一篇小作文里面犯的所有錯誤控制在3~4個,那么考官如果大發(fā)慈悲or眼神不太好,其實(shí)并不會減分。我也發(fā)現(xiàn)有一些同學(xué)是只會聽到對他們有利的話,至于是不是有條件or前提,他們不管那么如果是要求7or7以上的寫作分?jǐn)?shù),請你盡量保證整篇文章不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤吧.
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